Since the final writing test was in groups of two (I was partnered with Daphné Morneau-Dion), my final writing essay and its outline, please go to the following blog : http://daphnemd.blogspot.com/ .
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Tuesday, December 6, 2011
Thursday, November 17, 2011
Revising and editing Part II (15%)
Scores
My results for the proofreading, revising and editing assignment are the following:
Pre-test: 45/50
Lesson 2: 55/60
Lesson 3: 16/18
Lesson 4: 17/21
Lesson 5: 3/3 & 2 mistakes
Lesson 6: 8/10
Lesson 7: 20/25
Lesson 12: 39/40
Lesson 13: 14/14
Lesson 14: 28/32
Lesson 17: 12/12
Post-test: 48/50
Effectiveness
I think that the proofreading, revising and editing assignment is a great tool and should be used by many people regardless how proffesionnaly they may master the english language because this test offers an immense diversity of lessons to learn from. The lessons are great and not too time consuming. It permits us all to have a better idea of how to revise our own work.
Things learned
In the second lesson (Writing Setences) , I learned about run-on sentences. As a person, I speak a lot. A run-on sentence is sort of like if I did not stop talking instead of taking pauses between my sentences. In a literary way, those pauses would be represented by punctuation such as commas and periods. They are very important because if a sentence is too long, it may be missing some "key ingredients". Without them, a simple sentence could lose all it's meaning. In the sixth lesson (Using transitions), I learned that using proper transitions are very important such as keeping the energy at a party by transitions from one song to another smoothly. For example, using a transitions within a sentence can be used to connect two clauses or even connect two phrases! Liking ideas together keeps a reader intrigued because of how simple it can make a complex text appear. In the twelfth lesson (Checking Capitalization and Spelling) I learned that the rules learned here can be used in nearly any situation ever. I was surprised to learn here because I was under the impression that spelling and Capitalization was something easy. One that caught me go guard was the "able rule". I never even noticed that words with "able" made perfect sense without the suffix itself.
Appreciation
What I liked most about this course was the diversity of the lessons. It makes it easily accessible to everybody giving us all a chance to improve where we need it the most! I appreciated the sixth lesson (Using transitions) because it is a concept that i personally show difficulty for. On the other hand, what I liked least about the course what the length of the lessons themselves. Although it increased the effectiveness of our results, fifty questions per lesson in very long and made me loose interests quickly.
Course rating
I would give the revising and editing assignment a rating of eigth on ten. Firstly, I improved my weak point in writing big time! Secondly, the questions were very precise and allowed me to figure out where really needed the extra help. The reasons that i did not give the class a ten on ten was (as mentioned earlier) the length of the course itself. I brings out a little bit of boredom, the little questions gets old fast.
In conclusion, it was a very good course am I am happy that I have had the chance to do it in order to get the chance t figure the flaws in my revising techniques.
My results for the proofreading, revising and editing assignment are the following:
Pre-test: 45/50
Lesson 2: 55/60
Lesson 3: 16/18
Lesson 4: 17/21
Lesson 5: 3/3 & 2 mistakes
Lesson 6: 8/10
Lesson 7: 20/25
Lesson 12: 39/40
Lesson 13: 14/14
Lesson 14: 28/32
Lesson 17: 12/12
Post-test: 48/50
Effectiveness
I think that the proofreading, revising and editing assignment is a great tool and should be used by many people regardless how proffesionnaly they may master the english language because this test offers an immense diversity of lessons to learn from. The lessons are great and not too time consuming. It permits us all to have a better idea of how to revise our own work.
Things learned
In the second lesson (Writing Setences) , I learned about run-on sentences. As a person, I speak a lot. A run-on sentence is sort of like if I did not stop talking instead of taking pauses between my sentences. In a literary way, those pauses would be represented by punctuation such as commas and periods. They are very important because if a sentence is too long, it may be missing some "key ingredients". Without them, a simple sentence could lose all it's meaning. In the sixth lesson (Using transitions), I learned that using proper transitions are very important such as keeping the energy at a party by transitions from one song to another smoothly. For example, using a transitions within a sentence can be used to connect two clauses or even connect two phrases! Liking ideas together keeps a reader intrigued because of how simple it can make a complex text appear. In the twelfth lesson (Checking Capitalization and Spelling) I learned that the rules learned here can be used in nearly any situation ever. I was surprised to learn here because I was under the impression that spelling and Capitalization was something easy. One that caught me go guard was the "able rule". I never even noticed that words with "able" made perfect sense without the suffix itself.
Appreciation
What I liked most about this course was the diversity of the lessons. It makes it easily accessible to everybody giving us all a chance to improve where we need it the most! I appreciated the sixth lesson (Using transitions) because it is a concept that i personally show difficulty for. On the other hand, what I liked least about the course what the length of the lessons themselves. Although it increased the effectiveness of our results, fifty questions per lesson in very long and made me loose interests quickly.
Course rating
I would give the revising and editing assignment a rating of eigth on ten. Firstly, I improved my weak point in writing big time! Secondly, the questions were very precise and allowed me to figure out where really needed the extra help. The reasons that i did not give the class a ten on ten was (as mentioned earlier) the length of the course itself. I brings out a little bit of boredom, the little questions gets old fast.
In conclusion, it was a very good course am I am happy that I have had the chance to do it in order to get the chance t figure the flaws in my revising techniques.
Tuesday, October 25, 2011
Self Evaluation of Writing
What I like most about my text was how I could easily link the character of Mrs. Mallard to irony. My ideas where clear and precise and when I look over my work, i feel good about explaining Chopin's use of the figure of speech.
What I liked least about my text were the grammar mistakes I had made. When I read look at them and compare to the Writing Correction Code, I feel awful thinking "I should have know". My mistakes are proof that I did not look over my work when I was finished like I should always do. It is very important to read a second time and revise before handing (or in this case publishing) in a test. It permits us to identify those foolish mistakes.
Here are my very own suggestions in order to correct myself for the final writing test :
Introduction: I should have made my thesis statement more clear. It got a little confusing because I added a few more words than necessary. Keep it simple!
Thesis statement: Automatically linked to the concept of the introduction, I should have read my thesis statement a second time in order to notice my syntax error. Simple to correct yet so important. It's good to keep things simple so our ideas don't get mixed up.
Topic sentence of each paragraph: Although I find that my topics were well chosen and put into good phrases, once again, it would have been neat to look over my Midterm Writing test and notice the subtle preposition that was incorrect. I could have also added a few ideas to my text.
Content of the text: In order to improve the content of my text, I should maybe use more distinct ideas.
Organization of the text: It was very simple to organize our text because Mr. B told us to do an introduction, two development paragraphs and to finish off with a conclusion. If I want to keep doing a good gob on organizing my texts, the formula is simple, listen to the directions!
Development of the text: I liked how i developed my text. Although to make a good job a great one, I think that it would be better to directly link an idea to another one as if one idea was the consequence of another. It would insist on developing further points of views.
Sentence style of the text: In such a text, I have learned that it it important to not add personal opinions and the pronoun "I".
Vocabulary: A good text is often noticeable by its enriched vocabulary. The use of a dictionary (synonyms i this case) can often bring improvement to a simple idea. It is important to look up words that can give a more precise idea to the reader about what the author is attempting to describe.
Grammar: Similar to the vocabulary, I can make my grammar skills better by revising and using all the grammatical help at my disposal. Such punctuation errors (present in my conclusion) could have easily been spot ten and removed.
Spelling: To avoid the idiotic errors I often do (such as writing "rly" instead of "really" i a test, yes I have done that once in high school), I should take advantage of the time that has been given to me in class. Rushing is never a good idea. Using a dictionary is always an excellent way to avoid doing these types of mistakes. Also, I should look up the words I am not sure of, that way, there are no chances of mistakes!
Conclusion: In the conclusion, I should be careful to only repeat my thesis statement and not get confused by my text's main idea. It is important to have an idea and stick with it.
What I liked least about my text were the grammar mistakes I had made. When I read look at them and compare to the Writing Correction Code, I feel awful thinking "I should have know". My mistakes are proof that I did not look over my work when I was finished like I should always do. It is very important to read a second time and revise before handing (or in this case publishing) in a test. It permits us to identify those foolish mistakes.
Here are my very own suggestions in order to correct myself for the final writing test :
Introduction: I should have made my thesis statement more clear. It got a little confusing because I added a few more words than necessary. Keep it simple!
Thesis statement: Automatically linked to the concept of the introduction, I should have read my thesis statement a second time in order to notice my syntax error. Simple to correct yet so important. It's good to keep things simple so our ideas don't get mixed up.
Topic sentence of each paragraph: Although I find that my topics were well chosen and put into good phrases, once again, it would have been neat to look over my Midterm Writing test and notice the subtle preposition that was incorrect. I could have also added a few ideas to my text.
Content of the text: In order to improve the content of my text, I should maybe use more distinct ideas.
Organization of the text: It was very simple to organize our text because Mr. B told us to do an introduction, two development paragraphs and to finish off with a conclusion. If I want to keep doing a good gob on organizing my texts, the formula is simple, listen to the directions!
Development of the text: I liked how i developed my text. Although to make a good job a great one, I think that it would be better to directly link an idea to another one as if one idea was the consequence of another. It would insist on developing further points of views.
Sentence style of the text: In such a text, I have learned that it it important to not add personal opinions and the pronoun "I".
Vocabulary: A good text is often noticeable by its enriched vocabulary. The use of a dictionary (synonyms i this case) can often bring improvement to a simple idea. It is important to look up words that can give a more precise idea to the reader about what the author is attempting to describe.
Grammar: Similar to the vocabulary, I can make my grammar skills better by revising and using all the grammatical help at my disposal. Such punctuation errors (present in my conclusion) could have easily been spot ten and removed.
Spelling: To avoid the idiotic errors I often do (such as writing "rly" instead of "really" i a test, yes I have done that once in high school), I should take advantage of the time that has been given to me in class. Rushing is never a good idea. Using a dictionary is always an excellent way to avoid doing these types of mistakes. Also, I should look up the words I am not sure of, that way, there are no chances of mistakes!
Conclusion: In the conclusion, I should be careful to only repeat my thesis statement and not get confused by my text's main idea. It is important to have an idea and stick with it.
Tuesday, October 4, 2011
Talk About Irony!
″The Story of an Hour″
Question: Discuss how Chopin uses irony effectively throughout the story.
People don’t always react the way we expect them to. Knowing we sometimes enjoy this fact, authors often use techniques of language usage that leave us speechless during a story. In the short story ″The Story of an Hour″, Kate Chopin effectively uses irony in order to express the main character, Mrs. Mallard’s feelings.
Firstly, we will discover why Mrs. Mallard’s attitude may seem ironic. When a close family member passes away, let alone our own husband, people often go into a period of grief that may sometimes lead to depression. Well get ready for this. When Brently Mallard dies, all his wife seems to feel is joy for the new life that awaits her. Throughout paragraphs 11 to 20, the author uses many unexpected ways to describe Mrs. Mallard’s emotions. In paragraph 11, the protagonist mutters the words ″free, free, free! ″ over and over. She quickly starts processing the idea of years to come that would be hers absolutely in paragraph 12. Her reactions go so on and so forth during the main part of the story. Even if in the nineteen hundreds, women were not expected to question or express any concern about the quality of their lives, this attitude is much unintended.
Secondly, we will find out how irony is used once again at the resolution of the story. Knowing that a loved one is safe and alive should be great news, right? Wrong! According to Mrs. Mallard, the fact that her husband did not die in a railroad crash is awful news. It is written in the story that she had loved him at times, if so then why would she be horribly upset about his ″resurrection″? Of course, this is not based on a true story and once again, Kate Chopin uses the literary technique of irony in order to emphasise the opposite of what Mrs. Mallard should truthfully be going through. In the 21st paragraph, Josephine, Richards and Mrs. Mallard discover that Brently Mallard is in fact alive. By consequence, Mrs. Mallard dies from the shock that she will not go through her life on her very own and that she would not be able to live for herself.
In conclusion, we may say that Mrs. Mallard is an ironic character because she seems to feel the exact opposite of normal and expected behaviour. It was very hard, see impossible, to anticipate her character. Irony makes a great story because most people look forward to being surprised and taken off guard.
Tuesday, September 20, 2011
Litterary Interpretation : Occurrence at Owl Creek
In "An Occurrence at Owl Creek", A. Bierce uses remarkable imagery and misleading shifts in setting and point of view.
Tuesday, September 13, 2011
11 Ways to Introduce a Text
1. Biographical information
ex. Edgar Allan Poe had many psychological problems that affected his writing. This is evident in "The Tell-Tale Heart" wich explores the insanity of the main character.
2. A Quotation from the text itslef
ex. "Why will you say I'm mad?"
3. A Definition
ex. Poetic jusctice is supposed to mean that virtue is rewarded and that evil is punished.
4.Litarary element from the text
ex. Imagery is a powerful way to express feelings and emotions. In "The Tell-Tale Heart" by Edgar Allan Poe, the gives us a different look on how the main characters feels about the old man's eye.
5. Life experience of the author
ex. Ernest Hemingway had a lot of problems communicating with women.
6. Plot
ex. At the begining of Wilde's Nightingale's story, the bird's heart is figuratively broken by the student's sorrow. By the end, the bird's heart is literally split by the rose's thorn.
7. Philosophical / Sociological concept
ex. Trials involving life and death should be based on legal facts and arguments. (See Lady and the Tiger)
8. Historical Backround
ex. Gothicism was in vogue in the early nineteeth century, delving into metaphysical issus and the meaning of death.
ex. Edgar Allan Poe had many psychological problems that affected his writing. This is evident in "The Tell-Tale Heart" wich explores the insanity of the main character.
2. A Quotation from the text itslef
ex. "Why will you say I'm mad?"
3. A Definition
ex. Poetic jusctice is supposed to mean that virtue is rewarded and that evil is punished.
4.Litarary element from the text
ex. Imagery is a powerful way to express feelings and emotions. In "The Tell-Tale Heart" by Edgar Allan Poe, the gives us a different look on how the main characters feels about the old man's eye.
5. Life experience of the author
ex. Ernest Hemingway had a lot of problems communicating with women.
6. Plot
ex. At the begining of Wilde's Nightingale's story, the bird's heart is figuratively broken by the student's sorrow. By the end, the bird's heart is literally split by the rose's thorn.
7. Philosophical / Sociological concept
ex. Trials involving life and death should be based on legal facts and arguments. (See Lady and the Tiger)
8. Historical Backround
ex. Gothicism was in vogue in the early nineteeth century, delving into metaphysical issus and the meaning of death.
The Lady or The Tiger : Thesis Statement
In "The Lady or The Tiger", the princess which the protagonist (the young man) is in love with is somewhat the antagonist. Since the story does not maintain nor a climax, nor a falling action nor a denouement, this fact makes the open ending a truly mysterious and captivating aspect !
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